Monday, January 21, 2013

R’Ohm’eo and ‘Joule’iet | The ‘Physic’al Love Story – My Entry To The Get Published Contest


The Idea



The story of R’Ohm’eo and ‘Joule’iet revolves around two characters. 
Om Singh is a Mechanical Engineer from Delhi College of Engineering and works at ABB in Vadodara while Juilee Joshi is a Commerce Graduate from MS University at Vadodara and is working in a private firm in the same city.

Om has been a brilliant student since his schooldays but his heart yearns for creative outlets and endeavors. He loves music, writing and dance and is a regular student of Shiamak Davar’s dance classes. However, his scientific mind and analytical aptitude helps him in solving problems from a different perspective. 

Joule (as Om affectionately calls Juilee, due to the Joules of energy she releases in him whenever they meet), on the other hand, is a sweet and bubbly girl who has not yet grown up. She values emotions and keeps the ones she loves, close to her heart. Their love story blooms during a bus ride on National Expressway 1 between Ahemdabad & Vadodara.


But there’s a problem here, in fact two problems. Om, who’s a Rajput, is three years younger than Joule, who’s a Brahmin. Double the trouble and in addition to that, Om gets fired from his job, Joule’s mother is the queen of stubbornness and time is running out for both of them.


Can Om manage to use his scientific acumen to pull himself out of this bottleneck?
What happens when an Unstoppable force meets an Immovable object?
These and more questions will be unraveled in this ‘Physic’al love story.



What makes this story real?



The story draws on important landmarks, highways, food joints, companies, educational institutions in Vadodara, Ahmedabad and other cities. More importantly, this is a story which actually started unfolding on National Expressway 1 in the year 2011 and is still in progress. The names are fictitious but the events and the landmarks inside the cities are very much real.



Extract



Om’s mind was racing, trying to think of some method of exchanging contact details with Juilee. He was sweating, partly because of the summer heat but mainly owing to the presence of Juilee sitting right next to him. His hands occasionally touched hers and he felt a pack of energy bursting in his veins. Juilee’s bus stop was just minutes away; Om had to come up with something, when suddenly she got up to move to the aisle.
“This is it!” Om thought and in a flash, he took out his visiting card and handed it to her.
“Hey, if you need any help with commercial equipments or anything else, give me a call.”
Juilee took it with a smile and said, “Thanks for the card.” Then, she got off the bus hurriedly.
Om reached his office but his eyes were fixed on his mobile screen for some sign of a call or a message.



Please vote for this idea, click the heart icon or visit My Entry for Get Published


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"This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India."




Jay Singh
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102 comments:

  1. scientific mind.looks like ur story dude :)

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    1. Thank you for your feedback Jahid, please vote for my idea at http://bit.ly/VJX09e

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  2. Great ploy! I really love the intriguing line "What happens when an Unstoppable force meets an Immovable object"! All the best! Voted! :) BTW, do check out my entry too and vote for it too if you like it ;)

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    1. Thank you very much Chhavi :)
      Indeed, when both meet, sparks are bound to fly.
      Thanks for your vote and already voted for your entry :) :) :)

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  3. Your synopsis suggests that this one is going to be one hell of story. Science seems to be your muse! quite unconventional I must say! I vote!

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    1. First of all, thank you very much for the feedback on my idea and for voting for it. Science is quite intriguing, isn't it? :)

      Secondly, you are too generous, I am humbled by this gesture of yours. Thank you for considering me for this award. You've made my day :) :) :) :)

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  4. That was interesting to see how you made Romeo and Juliet very scientific! Nice plot also.
    All the best for the contest :)

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    1. Thank you very much Abhinav for your feedback.

      Hope you have voted :)

      Yes, doesn't science permeate our lives in one way or another?

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  5. My vote is all yours Jay.. loved the idea thoroughly.. Look forward for complete version of the story.. good luck dear..

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    1. Thank you very much Deepak, glad you liked it.
      Wish you luck as well :)

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  6. Voted! All the best for the contest!

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    1. Thank you very much Panchali ji for the vote and the wishes. :)

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  7. i thought i will get to read something on your blog today which won't be a sci-fi story, for a change. but this one is even more complicated than your usual posts :D.

    all the best for the contest!! sounds like a very interesting story! going to vote for you now.

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    1. HAHA, well what can I say, life itself is so complicated, atleast science can still be explained with some logic. :)

      Glad you liked it, thanks a ton for the feedback and your vote. It is all because of people like you that I've reached till this point. :)

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  8. Hi Jay, totally your style. looks like biology physics n chemistry started working. lol. quite a story.. Voted... :-)

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    1. Thank you Rat, you'll quite a lot to nibble in this concoction, hope that you get to nibble it on paper :p
      Thanks a lot for your feedback and your vote :)

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  9. My best wishes for the contest......

    http://debnature.blogspot.in

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    1. Thank you very much Debopam :) :)
      Hope you've voted :D

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  10. Creative, indeed, Jay. Interesting stuff. Good luck for the contest :)

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    1. Hi Vaishali, thank you very much for the lovely feedback. :) :)
      Hope you clicked the heart to vote :) :) :)

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    1. Thank you very much, glad you liked it.
      Hope you've voted for the entry :)

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  12. http://farzanaaliasgarmukhtiar.blogspot.in/

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  13. all the best for you contest buddy :) :) I was in it but couldn't go ahead...
    www.kunalverma.tk

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    1. Thank you very much Kunal for your wishes. Sad to hear that, any particular reasons for it?
      Do keep visiting :)

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  14. Great Story Jay!!! I am curious to read more :)
    Wish you all the best..Get Published!

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    1. Thank you very much for the feedback and your wishes Abhishek :) :)
      Yes, you will get to read in some time, if I get selected that is. :D

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  15. Good Luck. Will wait for the next chapter in this unique love story!

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    1. Thanks for the feedback, wishes and your comment Meoww. :) :)
      I do hope that I get an opportunity to make this story be heard. :D

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  16. Jay you have turned the chemistry of love into physics--the scientist in you will lead us to a totally unique story i am sure--good luck!

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    1. Thank you so much for the lovely comment Indu. Thanks for your wishes and your vote.
      Well, isn't life governed by the laws of Physics? ;)

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  17. Its the first time I have developed a liking for Physics through your story. Really intelligent way of combining Love with Physics!!! Kudos!! Keep writing and amusing everyone!

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    1. Welcome to my blog Kriti and thank you so much for your lovely comment.
      I'm humbled by your feedback. Glad you liked it.
      I'll surely continue doing that :) :) :)

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  18. Interesting premise, Jay. I wish you all the best for the contest. :)

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    1. Glad you liked it Akshay, thanks for the wishes and your feedback :) :)

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  19. Hey Jay! Where's my comment man? Kindly check your spam box...
    All the best for the contest!

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    1. Thank you very much for your wishes Amitji. :)

      Hmm, don't know what happened there, apologies for any inconvenience. Will keep that in check. :) :)

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  20. Interesting! I am so eager to know what finally happens when an 'unstoppable force meets an immovable object' as you so beautifully put it!
    You have my vote Jay, good luck :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog Kirti and thank you so much for your feedback and your vote.
      Indeed, I hope I get the opportunity to tell the story to everyone, praying for that :)

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  21. That is a forceful presentation, Jay! You earned your vote. Good Luck to you!

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    1. Thank you very much USP, more than earning, it is bloggers like you who instill faith and vote. That is what has brought me to such a position. :) :) :)

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  22. Liked the idea
    new , refreshing !
    Would lve to read more
    you hav my vote
    all the best jay :)

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    1. I'm humbled by this feedback of yours Afshan :)
      thank you very much for expressing your views and your vote as well :) :)

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  23. Something different than usual stories .. Good Job n All the Best .

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    1. Welcome to my blog Jyoti and thank you very much for giving your valued feedback and your wishes :) :) :)

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  24. Hi Jay,

    Liked your story and voted for it.

    cheers
    Amit

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    1. Welcome to my blog Amit and thank you very much for the feedback as well as voting for it. :) :)

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    1. Welcome to the blog Sunder. Thanks a lot for your wishes and your feedback :)

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  26. Short Story, this is good for writing as a story and as a reader as well, but in real life things cannot be judged as fast as short stories,because it must not end up as fast as it was started. keep writing....but not too fast in real life.

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    1. Welcome to my blog Rathna ji.
      Indeed, you've made a profound statement. With each passing year, our lives are becoming more and more short spanned and we want quick results.
      Don't worry, I'll take care of not going too fast. :)
      Do keep visiting here with feedback and views :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog Amit, glad you liked it.
      Thanks for your feedback :)

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  28. Lovely precursor, Jay. A red heart from me.

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    1. Glad you liked it KM :) :)
      Thank you so much for the lovely feedback and for your precious vote :)

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  29. Sounds very interesting Jay. And I am glad to have found your blog. :) Voting for you :) All the best.

    -Jas

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    1. It is lovely to hear such encouraging feedback from you Jas.
      I feel happy to hear that you liked it.
      Thank you for your feedback, your wishes and most importantly, your vote. :)

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  30. And Jay please enable email subscription.. I want to follow your blog.

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    1. The e-mail subscription is enabled on the blog, it can be found in the right hand side pane.
      You can also utilize the feeds to my page.
      Click on My RSS Feed

      Hope that has solved your query. Do let me know if you face any issues.

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    1. Thank you very much Kappu for dropping by and giving me your valuable vote. :) :)

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    1. Thank you so much Jaish for the feedback as well as your wishes, it means a lot to me :) :)

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  33. Nice and Interesting to read! All the best for the contest!

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    1. Welcome to my blog Alpesh. Glad that you liked the idea of the story :)
      Thank you for the feedback and your wishes as well :)

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  34. A good plot! Waiting to read the rest. Voted for you :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog :)
      Thank you for the lovely feedback and for your invaluable vote. :) :)

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  35. Hi, I am DEEPAK, author of blog "The Original Poetry" & I hereby Nominate your blog for THE LIEBSTER BLOG AWARD.
    For more details kindly refer to Liebster Blog Award post at http://theoriginalpoetry.blogspot.in/2013/01/liebster-award-time-to-rejoice.html
    Await your comments, Thanks!! :)

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    1. Deepak, this is an honor for me. I'm humbled by this gesture of yours.
      Thank you very much for considering me for this lovely award. :)

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  36. Its high time society got out of these caste related issues. Lets see what happens!

    www.anucreations.blogspot.in

    Link to my entry

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    1. http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/67/

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    2. Indeed, Anupama, our society needs to learn that we cannot live in such an overly conservative society. Thank you for your feedback.


      Yes, I found your story idea to be quite good. Voted for it and also left my thoughts on it. :) :) Wish you luck for the contest :)

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  37. Hehe what a lovely tale bonded by Science. Yes I fully agree that the generation today is way above such conservative thinking. Parents need to change there outlook & think beyond castes & class :( Most have them have accepted love with changing time, but still there's a long way to go. I wish you, Om & Joule all the very best :) Take care ! Thanks for voting !

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    1. Yes, you've very aptly summarized the plight of today's youth and what parents think of them.
      Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and your kind wishes :)
      Glad you liked the outline of the idea :)
      Wish you luck as well :)

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    1. Thank you very much Alka for your wishes :) :)

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  39. Firstly thank you for commenting on my book review. I am a newbie and you happen to be the first one to have commented on my blog.
    Read your post,sounds like an interesting story. I wish you and the characters of your story good luck.

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    1. Welcome to my blog Bushra :)
      You're welcome, it was quite an objective review, I liked it. :)

      Thank you very much, your feedback and your wishes are much appreciated. :)

      Do keep visiting :)

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  40. Loved the way you have put forth this idea, and would like to see it shape up as a full fledged story soon..:)
    Btw, would love to have your thoughts about my idea..
    http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/302/

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    1. Welcome to my blog Nirvaan :) :)
      Your lovely feedback encourages me and gives me a lot of hope for this story :)
      Thank you for sharing your feedback.
      I'll landing up on your idea after this and leave my feedback about it as well.
      Do keep visiting :)

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  41. Going to vote for it right now. Sounds like a great story...would love to read the whole of it :)
    All the best!

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    1. Hi Sudha, I'm humbled by your feedback and your wishes. Thank you very much for casting your invaluable vote. Hope that I get to put forth my complete story to the audience :)
      Thanks a lot for dropping by and sharing your views :)

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  42. Starting looks interesting! I would love to know the whole story... vote is on its way! :) All the best Jay!

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    1. This is lovely stuff, thank you so much Shesha for giving me your invaluable vote and also giving your feedback in the process. :)
      Glad that you could drop by and leave your wishes and your vote for me :)

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  43. Seemed like a travelogue to me, which sounds interesting! Good luck!

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    1. Well, that shall unveil in the complete story, that too in paperback form :)
      Thanks for dropping by and giving your valuable feedback and wishes :)

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    1. Thank you very much Vishal for your wishes and for your valuable vote as well :)

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  45. WOW A scientific love story wah :D awesome :D will look forward for more :) Jay! all the best

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    1. Welcome to my blog Ramya.
      Glad you liked the scientific edge to it. Thank you for your feedback.
      Thanks for the wishes as well :) :)

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  46. Hi Jay,

    Looks like a really 'techie' guy's story, through and through! Looking forward to seeing how it goes...all the best!
    Of course, I've voted for your idea.

    And, thanks so much for your heartening comment and your valued vote! :-)

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    1. Well, yeah you can say that sort of :) :) :)
      Thank you very much for dropping by and sharing your feedback about the idea.
      Thanks a lot for the vote as well. :)
      Wish you luck as well :D

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  47. WOW!! This sounds like a modern day Romeo and Juliet!

    Wonderful until now :)

    P.S: I need to warn you though. I'm a huge Shakespeare fan and would not like it if someone messes up his work :P

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    1. Welcome to my blog Soumya :) :)
      I'm absolutely humbled & enthralled by your feedback :)

      Well, I do hope that I'm able to do justice to the evergreen love epic :)
      Keep watching for the complete story, hope that I get published :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog June.
      Thanks a lot dropping by and giving me your valuable vote. :)

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  49. A-ha!!! A love story with mature, intellgent people! This should be interesting indeed!

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    1. Thanks for dropping by and leaving your wonderful feedback about this story idea.
      Glad you liked it.
      Do keep visiting :)

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  50. Nice Extract and indeed unique....
    Really eager to read the full story...
    :)

    Himani

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    1. Thank you very much for your valuable feedback Himani, I hope that you get to read the complete story in paperback form :) :) :)

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  51. Waw this sounds lovely, want to know what happens to the guy.. :)

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